The Narrative Essay

 

Make a Point

The illumination of an experience is the purpose of a narrative essay; however, the point you are making should carry meaning that a general audience can relate to. If you are writing about a life-changing experience or an ordinary day, the point you make in your thesis statement should be a claim that you can support with details.

 

Conventional Rules and Rules of Thumb

In the narrative essay, you are the storyteller, so use conventional rules, such as plot, setting, character development, and conflict. The introduction paragraph should grab the reader’s attention, and most of the time it should contain the thesis statement. Your body paragraphs should always support the thesis with examples in the form of anecdotes. One way to achieve this is to bring the characters to life with dialogue. An effective way of writing dialogue is to start a new line with each new person speaking. To ensure that your narrative is rich and engaging use detail when describing situations, settings, people and personal feelings.

Based on the assignments, you may write your narrative essay as an observation or something that changed you. Either way, make sure that it is personal enough for you to be descriptive and general enough to apply to your audience.

 

Good Example of a Thesis It is important to try to help your friends, even if it puts you in harm’s way.
Bad Example of a Thesis I was in a tornado once, and it was scary.

Example of a Strong Narrative Essay

Intro
On an otherwise calm and uneventful day, I heard what sounded like an enormous train, derailed from the tracks and coming straight at me. As I put the mattress over my head, I suddenly remembered that my roommates had not made it home yet. I had to make a decision quickly.… Do I stay under the mattress and be a coward, or do I go and try to find my friends?

Thesis
It is important to try to help your friends, even if it puts you in harm’s way. I learned this one spring day, when a twister tore through downtown Ft. Worth. I could have stayed in my closet with my cat, a mattress over my head and a radio, but in hindsight, I am glad I braved the storm to look for my friends.

Body Paragraphs
En route, I watched the bent anarchy of rebar, walls, glass and unidentifiable structures, gnarled and toothy, as they paraded in a watercolor swirl in the aluminum windows. Driving the route from our house to downtown that they would have traveled, the song “A Bridge Over Troubled Water” came on, which was fitting to the situation. By the time I approached downtown, the wind had ceased and an eerie stillness settled in. Puddles stretched out in front of me, threatening to engulf the whole town. What I noticed first about the water everywhere was the absence of artificial light reflecting back at me. Night had fallen and because of the tornado all of the streetlights were out. I thought to myself…        

“This is what night is supposed to look like.”

I noticed that even the marquis lights were out. All of the buildings were dark and anonymous; none bared the logo of a corporate tenant. I witnessed natural night, just as people had before humans preferred artificial sunlight. For, as far as the eye could see there was not a working conduit for electricity to pass through, nor could I hear that distinct buzzing in the air. There was only me, Simon and Garfunkel on the radio, and the glimpses of scared people hiding under disjointed facades of the less-affected buildings. Stepping out the car, I saw the moon finding its face in the stillness of the oblong puddles below me. The power lines looked like the teeth of a boxer after a brutal fight; they were going every which way in a haphazard arrangement.

I found my friend’s car, in the aftermath, trapped in debris. I was terrified! What happened to them, I wondered. I looked across the street and among a crowd of astonished and frightened expressions; I finally located my friends. I saw from the ghost-white expression on my friend Leah’s face that she was in shock. My other roommate (and friend) was talking amongst others who were injured. He was helping the bartender pour shots of whiskey to calm the people down, since the refuge they had found happened to be a bar. Leah had a piece of glass embedded in her arm and bloody knees; my other roommate had deep cuts on the palms of his hands. Leah told me that she was caught running from her car to this building to seek shelter, and when she opened the heavy-metal door to the bar, the tornado picked her up like rag doll and slammed her knees into the asphalt. They did not need an ambulance, so I ushered them to my car. I was met with reluctance when I insisted that they go to the emergency room. Arguing the whole way, I drove them to the emergency room. They were admitted to triage, and the doctor said that Leah’s gash in her arm needed stitches, and she needed a tetanus shot. They disinfected their wounds, and a few hours later, we went home.

Conclusion
Even though my friends might have fared okay without me, I am glad that I could help them out. Since, Leah was in shock, she was not aware of the seriousness of her injuries and probably would not have sought medical attention without my coaxing. If I am faced with a life-threatening situation again, I will come to the aid of my friends. Hopefully, this sentiment will not be challenged any time soon.

 

Even in a narrative essay, the thesis (as always) should make a claim that is supportable by your vivid details, dialogue or monologue. Although it may be interesting to you that you survived a tornado, what is more interesting is the over-arching claim or what you learned about yourself through this experience.

 

Review

Your narrative essay should contain the following:

 

Note Relax and compose the essay as if you are telling a story to a friend.

 

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